Lord Anzius

I do remeber the 9/11... I was on the first grade. But that thing with you Americans is that you always want to destroy everyone.... I mean it was a ...

Thanks I'll get editing.

Actually I disagree with the "black are a minority" statement. But back to subject: I dunno if it is racism, it depends how they got to the point, My father ...

Okay here is something I have noticed in the last week about the republicans: They always seem to want war with someone and also are very anti-gay. This is the ...

MARADOMIN: Do you think that was wise? The dark knights aren't the only ones who get their food from the fields. Also the saviours get their food fom there. Asked ...

Thanks. :D

MARADOMIN: All the dragons had lifted up. Ari in the lead. Maradomin was flying with his men. Although some of his men had no dragon they rode horses or ran. ...

ooookay. I accidentally read the second chapter first... sorry. Everyone gasped. "Are you sure of your facts Por?" Barr asked. "I have been researching it for twenty years...unless I have ...

okay... nice. Not too many mistakes (that I saw). So far, she was the only person ever to leave the valley. Somehow, that made her felt lonely. don't you mean ...

I walked through the city. There were some peculiar companies and enterprises: Werewolf hair cuts; Troll hair adder; The leaking dwarf bottle! I walked into a café called elf house ...

I am sorry to interrupt... but I am on a jorney to write the greatest book ever. Even though this book has been critted many times I want the piece ...

Bows and asks for rewieving.

I will crit anything witch has even one of the following recuirements: 1 Has magic 2 Has elves 3 has dwarfs 4 well you get it. 5 Humor. Hit me ...

please give it a try.

It's fantasy... no magic though....... yet. Maybe in the 7-8 chapter but not now. If you could please critt the other chapters of this book aswel ... please :D